Eval expression problem

I can't seem to figure out why the first example does not produce
the same answer as the second very kludge example.
The day and year and time do not make it into the output field in example 1.

"Months" is an array of month names.
RSFLIB is 10 character (so says RPG ) variable length field
     in a file created by SQL. It contains "TRRSF999P"
Lmm is a 2 byte signed numeric field containing  05
Ldd is a 2 byte signed numeric field containing  28
Lyyyy is a 4 byte character field containing  2000
Lhhmmss is a 6 byte signed numeric field containing  010647
#Time is a 8 byte character field
LOGTEXT is 50 character field.

I                        *VAR A  113  124  RSFLIB 

Example 1
Eval                    logtext = RSFLIB + ' was rebuilt on ' + 
                        Months(Lmm) + %editw(Ldd : ' 0') +   
                        ', ' + Lyyyy  +                            
                        ' at ' + %editw(Lhhmmss : '0 :  :  ')      

LOGTEXT = 'TRRSF999P was rebuilt on May                      ' 

Example 2
Eval                    logtext = RSFLIB + ' was rebuilt on ' +    
                        Months(Lmm)                                
eval                    logtext = %trimr(logtext) + ' ' +          
                        %editw(Ldd : ' 0')            
eval                    logtext = %trimr(logtext) + ', ' + lyyyy
eval                    logtext = %trimr(logtext) + ' at '
eval                    #time  =  %editw(Lhhmmss : '0 :  :
eval                    logtext = %trimr(logtext) + ' ' + #time   

LOGTEXT = 'TRRSF999P was rebuilt on May 28, 2000 at  1:06:47 '

Thanks for looking at this
Steve